Metacognitive Blog: And Then There Were
In my essay I revised Vera's personality in Part 2. I also, lengthened the explanation for why I used the quotes in the book. My mom helped me the most to improve my essay. She helped me the most because she went through my essay and told me what made sense and what needed to be cleared up. I made many tiny mistakes and she helped me fix them. The peer edit helped too because Maddie went through my essay and helped my with organization and grammar. I think learning more about organizing my ideas and how to put them together. I noticed I still make grammar mistakes, so I would like to relearn more grammar. I think I have room to grow in being more creative when I write. My goal is to be more creative and not make as many mistakes in grammar.
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